The Poet Dreams of You
Tea-colored thoughts
spin arabesques
about my desk
& what I ought
to do is not
what they suggest.
Friday, April 25, 2014
Thursday, April 24, 2014
Sad Men Slamming Doors: Mad Men Season Seven: A Day's Work
Sad Men Slamming Doors: A Day’s Work Ends With Hope
We start with Don in disrepair but lucky for him, Dawn comes at night to fix him up. We can be a bit worried that he’s paying Dawn (she certainly is) but I think it’s lazy to equate every transaction that involves Don, women, and cash with prostitution. This is a nice continuation of Don freezing on the porch just three weeks prior (7).
I’d like to note here that Dawn is right. If Shirley didn’t immediately say that the flowers were hers then she should have never said anything. If your boss claims something and you don’t take it back right away, you’re kind of SOL.
Only to be shot down when she realizes Don isn’t there. Then Joan’s not there either and Lou starts the aforementioned slamming of doors (15).
Father and Daughter:
There. That was nice, wasn’t it? In an episode full of
slamming doors it was good to close one with hope. Actually, pretty much everybody in this
episode ended things well.
You know, except for Peggy (1)
But let’s forget about the
gloomy masturbator (2) for a few hundred words and focus on happier themes.
Pretty much everyone is saying that “A Day’s Work” is the
best episode since Season Five (3). While I’m inclined to disagree with regard to the “since” (4), I’ll agree it’s a great episode.
Part of what makes everyone say it’s great is that it has so
many feel-good vibrations, especially after “Time Zones” ended so bleakly.
Great things happen: we see Dawn helping
Don. Pete and Bonnie seem to be happy. Shirley, Dawn, and Joan all get
promotions in status if not in pay. Sally and Don reconcile. But sunshine and rainbows don’t themselves
make for great television, they make for “feel-good” television and “A Day’s
Work” is by far the happiest episode of Mad
Men (5).
An episode of only bubblegum and lollipops wouldn’t be worth
watching. What makes “A Day’s Work” great is how it balances all that good with
often subtle bad and some obvious trouble and slamming doors (6) that turn into
opportunities.
Speaking of trouble. . .
We start with Don in disrepair but lucky for him, Dawn comes at night to fix him up. We can be a bit worried that he’s paying Dawn (she certainly is) but I think it’s lazy to equate every transaction that involves Don, women, and cash with prostitution. This is a nice continuation of Don freezing on the porch just three weeks prior (7).
Then Sally & Co are discussing her roommate’s dead
mother—another kind of closed door. Sally makes a funny joke about wanting
Betty dead (8) and we wonder what’s happened to their relationship in the five
months between the smoking car ride of October 1968 and February 1969 (9).
Meanwhile in California, Bonnie and Pete are getting their
freak on atop some paperwork when Ted slips by to say good night. I’m not sure
if this scene was hilarious or weird or both. Either way, Ted doesn’t give a
shit about anything.
You tell ‘em, Teddy!
Back in New York, Peggy forgets it’s Valentine’s Day and
then steals Shirley’s roses. Roger tries to joke with Lou Avery but you can’t
joke with an idiot
(10).
Sally & Co are on a train, dishing about shopping
instead of funerating and Sally realizes she’s lost her purse with her address
book in it. If she doesn’t have that, she can’t call Glen to beat the crap out
of kids who try to make fast moves on her. Can’t have that at all (11).
Then we are treated to the Dawn & Shirley show (12) with
the darkly comic misapplication of names, hinting at their co-workers’
collective inability to tell them apart.
Hint to workers at SC&P: Shirley dresses better (13).
I’d like to note here that Dawn is right. If Shirley didn’t immediately say that the flowers were hers then she should have never said anything. If your boss claims something and you don’t take it back right away, you’re kind of SOL.
After this is a great scene sandwich. Don and Dave Wooster
are having a bit of lunch (14) and Sally goes to find daddy at the office.
Oops. Remember how I wondered back in the first “Sad Men” if Don had
told anyone about his work situation? Guess he hadn’t. I mean who was going to
find out, right? It’s not like his daughter who got suspended from boarding
school for buying booze was going to sneak away for a jaunt in NYC, right?
So Sally, unable to find her purse or a good way home,
discovers Lord Lou the Ignorant in her dad’s office and tries her hand at some
epic Betty Hofstadt Draper Francis bitchface:
I said "Don. Draper. Bitch."
Only to be shot down when she realizes Don isn’t there. Then Joan’s not there either and Lou starts the aforementioned slamming of doors (15).
Back to lunch with an unsuspecting Don who is surprised by
Jim Hobart who, always wanting to add to his collection, wants to know if Don
is taking lunches (16). He’s not but Hobart pays anyway.
We’re briefly treated to an escalation in the misadventures
of Petty Peggy before retiring to the bicoastal partner’s meeting. Pete, like
always, gets shut down even when he’s right. This time it’s because Bob Benson
is Jim Cutler’s man and Jim Cutler is scheming for complete control of SC&P
(17). Roger blows up, Joan storms off, and Bert looks like he’s on death’s door
(18). The simmer has begun.
Don finds Sally in his apartment where she catches him in a
lie but doesn’t call him out on it because that would be even more
embarrassing. Instead she instructs him to “just tell the truth” on her excused
absence note. Luckily, Dawn saves the day (again) with a heads-up phone call.
Unfortunately, this phone call and Dawn’s loyalty to Don in
general, brings down the wrath of Lord Lou who, not missing a racist beat (19)
casts Dawn into the darkness and takes time to get snippy with a partner (20).
Not wanting to give us respite from upset, we go back to
California where Pete tells off Roger (21) who has already hung up and then
waxes philosophical (22) to an entirely indifferent Ted who delivers the best
terrifying line of the show so far: “just cash the checks; you’re gonna die one
day.”
In a lovely bit of vengeance, Joan assigns “Mind of a child”
Meredith to Lou and puts Dawn up front as the face of SC&P.
Don and Sally are driving up to her school and have perhaps
the best verbal exchange of Mad Men.
It’s set off by the Turtle’s song “Elenore (23),”
specifically the lines from the chorus: “can I take the time / to ask you to
speak your mind.” Speak her mind Sally does:
“Do you know how hard it was for me to go to your apartment? I could have run into that woman. I could be in the elevator; she could get in and I’d have to stand there wanting to vomit while I smelled her hairspray.”
This is in response to the most unfair thing Don has ever
said to anyone, let alone Sally: “just like your mother.” He is broken by this
reply. All he can do is apologize. Sally tells him to stop talking and Kiki
Shipka pulls this scene off with perfect anger and disgust. I’d watch it more
times just for her acting if it weren’t so hard to watch. In fact, I’d be
tempted to make the argument that this scene, along with the rest of “A Day’s
Work” (24) is the climax of Mad Men.
Not the most exciting part (that’s not a climax anyway) but the most important
part. Everything afterwards is likely to be denouement (25). This confrontation
between father and daughter is what breaks Don so that he can be healed.
Not to be outdone in brokenness, Peggy lets her confrontation
with Shirley get the better of her (see the second picture), Cooper notices
that there’s (gasp) a negro working at reception (the horror!), and Pete,
facing redundancy, tries unsuccessfully to distract Bonnie from her work (26).
Ever full of light, Bonnie gets another great line in an episode of great
lines: “our fortunes are in other people’s hands and we have to take them”
(27).
Then we’re taken back in structure to our previous scene
sandwich of food, SC&P, and back to food. Sally and Don are at a diner (28)
and Don is desperately trying to fix what may be irreparable damage. He does
this by telling the truth and as a result he and Sally have one of the show’s
most open and frank conversations (29).
Then we go to the heart of SC&P: Joan’s office. Bert
knocks, Peggy bursts in, and Jim knocks. They all want something different but
only Jim’s request makes Joan pause.
Back at the diner, after Sally ditches her friend for her
dad, Don makes a great joke about doing a dine and ditch (30) which makes Sally
smile for once.
The final three scenes are all scenes of triumph but only
two are scenes of hope.
The first is the glorious reshuffling of ¾ of the great
ladies of SC&P (sorry Moira and like, um, the other ones): Shirley becomes
a more important secretary, Joan gets her own office in accounting and Dawn
becomes head of personnel (31). What on earth is Bert Cooper going to think of
that?
Note: Dawn does not care what he thinks.
To keep a lid on all that joy and hope dawning (32) in
SC&P, we get to see the elevator ride between Roger and Satan—I mean Jim
Cutler. I’d like to take a moment to glory in the costuming here:
Roger has a grey coat and suit; Jim has a blue coat and
suit. Roger wears no glasses; Jim does. Roger has a patterned tie and vest; Jim
has a solid-colored tie with a clip. Roger has a point collar; Jim has a wide
collar. Roger has a scarf; Jim doesn’t. Roger has regular cuffs; Jim has French
cuffs. Roger has a black hat he is wearing; Jim has a grey hat he is holding.
Roger has a pointy nose and white hair; Jim has a blunt nose and brown hair.The
coats are different styles. Even the hats are different styles. Jim has a
fedora and Roger has a Homburg which is the fanciest had one could get away
with wearing in public at the time. These two men couldn’t be presented as
being any more dissimilar. But we know that. What makes the scene is Jim
turning to Roger and saying “I’d hate to think of you as an adversary. I’d
really hate that.” That is some cold dinner, man. Cutler reminds me of the guy
in the Godfather trilogy who killed a
wiseguy with his glasses. I wouldn’t want him to consider me an adversary
either. In that scene Roger is both surprised and a bit scared. But what can he
do (33)?
Finally we are back to the car with Sally and Don. They pull
up to Miss Minchin’s Boarding School for Naughty Rich Girls and Don wants to
make sure everything is okay. It’s a fairly standard exchange and you can see
in Don’s face that he’s worried he’s blown everything. Until Sally turns around
and says the best line in all of Mad Men:
“Happy Valentine’s Day. I love you.”
Don’s face in response is perfect:
That’s a man who just found out he hasn’t lost everything. A man of hope.
The only question that really remains is will Mad Men end
with landing on the moon or the massacre at Kent State? Hope or despair? What
measure of each?
Old and new predictions:
Old business:
1: Sally showed up. She was fabulous.
2: No Megan. Ah well.
3: Bert showed his death-mask of a face.
4: Nothing going down here. Peggy’s gotta reach out to someone,
though.
5: Lou’s still around, the bum.
New business:
1: It’s time for some Francis family drama. I foresee
yelling.
2: Don will get some offers of real employment: SC&P or
elsewhere.
3: Some LA stuff will happen and we’ll probably see Megan.
4: Harry will screw the pooch in a big way.
5: Margaret Sterling Hargrove and Roger’s house of orgies
will reappear.
Endnotes
1: First of all: SAD
BOW! Second: this is a throwback to the penultimate scene from last week’s
“Time Zones.” But instead of crying, Petty—I mean Peggy—is head-bashingly mad
at herself for overreacting to Shirley’s faux pas (and really, Shirley—tell the
boss they’re your flowers when she takes them or don’t tell her at all). Can “Not
That Girl” catch a break in 1969? Also: did you notice That Girl playing at Don’s apartment? Boo yeah!
2: What the actual fuck, Michael Ginsberg? Rude!
3: Which had the best episode of the series (and perhaps all
of television) so far: “Far Away Places.”
4: “The
Quality of Mercy” is very good
and everyone who hates on Season 6 in general and Sylvia Rosen in specific has
no idea what they’re complaining about.
5: Unless, of course, your name is Peggy Olson.
6: I don’t have time to look right now but how many doors
had been slammed on Mad Men prior to
“A Day’s Work”? It seemed to be a pretty clear motif, what with the modular
walls shaking and everything.
7: The roach was a bit much. We get it.
8: Where is January Jones as Betty? There’s only so much
love we can get on her Instagram.
9: For one: we know that Don not only showed his kids the
brothel where he grew up but told at least Sally the truth about who he was
(revealed at the end of “A Day’s Work” when he tells Sally he didn’t say
anything to the Hershey people she didn’t already know—good for you, Don!).
10: Seriously, the internet tells me they killed this guy.
Can’t we drop Lou out of a window or something? Isn’t Manolo
Colon available?
11: Too bad Sally didn’t have a smartphone or something.
12: Yes, I will also watch this inevitable spin-off along
with Peggy’s Apartment or whatever.
13: Is it me or were Coffee-Mate and Sweet’n Low everywhere Dawn was this episode? I
don’t even know what to begin to make of that. Both products were over a decade
old by 1969. I suppose it could go along with her advice to Shirley: “keep
pretending; that’s your job” but I wouldn’t say for sure.
14: Of course they can’t hire
Don, can they? Not unless SC&P is dumb enough to fire him—note: Jim Cutler:
not that dumb. It’s worth paying Don’s salary to keep other firms from using
him.
15: How hard is this, Lou? “Your dad’s not here right now.
He’s working on several projects outside of the building and I’m using his office
for the moment. Let me get him on the phone for you. Do you want a sandwich?”
Jeez.
16: Do your research Jim. If Don’s not an actual
millionaire, he’s pretty close by now.
17: Even though his initials are JC, I’m pretty sure Cutler
is the Devil.
18: Speaking of initials, did you ever notice that his are
“B.C.”?
19: Though the relevant Civil Rights Act had been around for
five years at this point, it wasn’t really until the CRA of 1968 (and,
ironically to us younguns, the Nixon administration) that such laws really took
hold of the public consciousness.
20: I mean it’s just Joan, right? What can she do?
21: Note: Pete is right.
22: The bit about being dead is an old saw for Mad Men.
23: The story of the creation of “Elenore” is pretty fantastic.
24: Specifically the ascendency of the working women in the
show.
25: That doesn’t mean it’s going to be boring, you know.
26: Does Bonnie like this little distraction? We know she
likes Pete.
27: She says, with two handfuls of Campbell ass.
28: Though I noticed it when Don and Sally were at the
apartment, it’s easier to point out now: they match perfectly:
Sally:
Don:
Don:
Father and Daughter:
Their grays match. Their blacks match. Even the gold in
Don’s tie matches Sally’s jewelry and hair. As always, Janie Bryant is incredible.
29: Can you make a mountain out of the molehill of Don
looking down and to his left when he says “of course I do” in response to Sally
asking if he still loves Megan? Of course you can!
30: To the internet dummies who thought the $5 Don pulled
out of his wallet wouldn’t cover the tab, remember that $5 then is about $35
today. That’s not only paying the bill—it’s leaving a good tip.
31: If there are any labor historians out there who can
answer this question, I’d like to know how radical Dawn’s status would be: a
black head of personnel at a large New York white-owned company.
32: I will not apologize for that pun.
33: During the conference call scene Bert and Joan give
similar looks when Jim refers to Don as their “collective ex-wife.” One assumes
that the old guard fully intended to bring Don back and Jim’s attitude is the
first they’re considering he isn’t coming back.
#NPM14: Day 24: Poem! To the Celebrity Whose Book Sells Out
To the Celebrity Whose Book Sells Out:
Film Flam
Poet-
Aster
Hipster
Huckster
Twitter
Twit. Your
Selfies
Show how
Shallow
We are.
Film Flam
Poet-
Aster
Hipster
Huckster
Twit. Your
Selfies
Show how
Shallow
We are.
Wednesday, April 23, 2014
Tuesday, April 22, 2014
#NPM14: Thirteen Ways of Looking At a Poet
Poet
Poeterritory
Poeterrorist
Poeternal
Poetemporary
Poeterrrific
Poeterrible
Poetruth
Poetale
Poetimid
Poetemerarious
Poetenacious
Poetry
Poeterritory
Poeterrorist
Poeternal
Poetemporary
Poeterrrific
Poeterrible
Poetruth
Poetale
Poetimid
Poetemerarious
Poetenacious
Poetry
#NPM14 Day 22: Poem! Like Old Love
Like Old Love
Swished memories
of your mouth
and our youth
will always tease
me when I look
at your Facebook.
Swished memories
of your mouth
and our youth
will always tease
me when I look
at your Facebook.
Monday, April 21, 2014
Sad Men
I've been writing a series I'm calling Sad Men on Mad Men's final season. The first two were published at Trop where I'll be writing a monthly column on TV. Please enjoy, share, and discuss!
I'll update this post when each article appears.
Post one, Overview: "Selling Mad Men"
Placing Mad Men in modern American culture.
Post two, Episode One: "Sad(der) Men: 'Time Zones'"
A critical recap, with a focus on music and Peggy.
I'll update this post when each article appears.
Post one, Overview: "Selling Mad Men"
Placing Mad Men in modern American culture.
Post two, Episode One: "Sad(der) Men: 'Time Zones'"
A critical recap, with a focus on music and Peggy.
#NPM14 Poems! Days 18-21
You can always catch these poems live on Twitter!
Day 18:
Spring Lightning
Wet parking lot
Get barking hot
Let larking not
Jet harking got
Bet farking zot
Het jarking tot
Hzzzzkzzzgzzt
Day 19:
Holidays
Are hard
The shard
Of family
The haze
Of pretended
Love
Is never
Enough.
Day 20:
This is
Easter:
I still
miss her.
Day 21:
I Didn't Need Mick Jagger and Keith Richards to Tell Me This.
I saw him today
at the resurrection
my salvation
in his hands
I hoped we would make
a connection
but I couldn't
even stand.
Day 18:
Spring Lightning
Wet parking lot
Get barking hot
Let larking not
Jet harking got
Bet farking zot
Het jarking tot
Hzzzzkzzzgzzt
Day 19:
Holidays
Are hard
The shard
Of family
The haze
Of pretended
Love
Is never
Enough.
Day 20:
This is
Easter:
I still
miss her.
Day 21:
I Didn't Need Mick Jagger and Keith Richards to Tell Me This.
I saw him today
at the resurrection
my salvation
in his hands
I hoped we would make
a connection
but I couldn't
even stand.
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